My poems as comments in HubPages
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My Poems inspired by HubPages
The poems of this hub are all written as comments to questions or to hub pages. I haven't written any poem for several years and I have missed writing poetry. Now I felt inspired by the writings of members here at HubPages and I am thankful for this. I am enjoying writing poetry and I hope that you also can enjoy reading them...
Although I have learned that people take even a poem personally and react angry on it, but this seems the usual, when people don't feel confirmed then they use the situation to react, putting the fault to the outside and the other. This will not stop me from expressing myself, I just will watch out more carefully where I go, not to through my ... Anyway, I will not enter in this common game and so I will not react and pay back with the same coins. In case I react, then I can choose...
Yes, when one is expressing oneself, then not necessarily to find confirmation, at least I don't need this. But if there is absolutely no response or only negative reactions, then I will think about it and might come to the conclusion, that I might be at the wrong place. So if there is only one response, then this tells me that there might be others who enjoy my writings even though they don't tell me. With Web pages it is easier to know about it, because one can install a counter, so one knows exactly how many people visited each page. From this I know, that my health pages are visited about fife hundred times more than my poetry pages.
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Comment to the hub: "The Art of answering Questions"
The Art of Questions & Answers
The Art of Asking:
To ask a good question one must be an artist
open to be creative and aware to receive
critical to all and longing for truth.
The Art of search for Answers:
Diving without direction into depth -
unknown fields of abundance in emptiness
even a spark gives light within darkness.
The Art of receiving Answers:
Getting out of ones worn out confirmation games
longing for essence to go beyond ones dried shell
one becomes the answer melted into ones source.
The Art of Answering:
All sparks I have received during my long life
have given me light on my way - finding myself
sharing myself with those who urge to receive.
BeiYin
25.12.09
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Comment to the hub: "Why we are behind bars..."
Tanka:
People are like eggs
protected by a hard shell
even though fragile!
Still waiting to be hatched out -
growth beyond their rigid form...
BeiYin
25.12.09
He expressed himself
happy using offered space
calling humans mood
surprising slash back hits him
Reminder: Don't play in public.
BeiYin
25.12.09
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Comment to the hub: "Revolving Doors"
Tanka:
Entrance to exit:
watching painful reactions -
splitting fake from truth.
Moon light spreads shadow all around -
Sun shine abundance through itself.
BeiYin
24. 12. 09
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Comment to the hub: "Haiku Cow"
Tanka:
My life seems all stuck
no echo resounds from far
Thrown back to myself:
what else to do - silly me?
Go back to your source - just be!
BeiYin
23. 12. 2009
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Comment to the hub: "Wasted Day"
Tanka:
What an awesome day
silence all around
undisturbed by me
space for music from within
filled from far beyond myself
BeiYin
23. 12. 2009
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Comment to hub: "Fear of Staying..."
Leave your shell!
before it gets crushed
it's fake security any way.
You are protected from within
dare to be naked
under the sun of reality!
Wings and eyes will grow
taking you to new horizons
unknowns new dimensions...
BeiYin
23. 12. 09








catalystsnstars Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago
I love your way of replying to hubs with poetry. They are funny and true. What I understood was that although you should be careful, don't allow other people's reactions stop you from reacting yourself. Thanks.